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I’m a college admissions advisor now studying at Brown University. I was admitted to 11 universities, 12 if you include the ones I didn’t apply to. And now I’m going to help you achieve amazing results with your applications.
Wherever you’re at with developing your personal statement, we will guide you step-by-step to creating a winning college essay that will WOW admissions officers at your dream school.
To help you write that winning essay, we’ll use a three stage process.
CONTENT & DEVELOPMENT
Before getting into the nitty-gritty of grammar and flow, it’s important that we decide what story we’re going to tell - and what parts are important for your essay. Together, we’ll look at your essay from a birds-eye view to perfect your story structure.
LINE EDITING
Next, we’ll delve into the structure of your essay line-by-line, paragraph by paragraph. By working on your sentence structure and word choice, we’ll make sure that every sentence makes an impact. We’ll trim the sentences that weigh your essay down as well, so your essay is more readable.
COPY EDIT & PROOFREADING
Next, we’ll work out any inconsistencies in the style and formatting of your essay. Further, I’ll comb through and fix any grammatical errors, punctuation mistakes that might still be present. To finish up, we’ll read through your essay together.
It means the world to me that students in this coaching program get the results they’re looking for, so I have included 10 bonus tools, systems, and sessions to help you create amazing essays.
PRE-REVISION BONUSES